The Wrong Evelyn
A downloadable game for Windows, macOS, and Linux
The Wrong Evelyn is a comedy-centric horror game which tells the story of a lonely guy who just wants to have a normal conversation with his crush without his overwhelming awkwardness making it WEIRD.
So what's his non-weird gameplan?
Why, to create an AI clone of her to PRACTICE, of course!
This virtual version of Evelyn will get him with the REAL one, don't you worry.
She won't let ANYTHING get in the way of what's no doubt TRUE LOVE....
There are 5 endings to....eh...END UP WITH, including:
- Good ending where everyone is happy :D
- Neutral ending where things are ok I guess whatever :/
- Bad ending where WHAT THE FRICK IS HAPPENING NO PLEASE SAVE ME >:O
CONTENT WARNINGS:
Please be aware this game contains:
- flashing lights
- some crude humor
- no swearing :D (so very family friendly) (ignore the body horror and gore)
- body horror and gore
- anime references
If any of the above deeply disturb you, then this is the time to TURN AWAY!!
CREDITS
STORY/CONCEPT by: Cheddar Teeth/RadicalJoJo
Written by: Cheddar Teeth
Soundtrack by: RadicalJoJo
Art by: Cheddar Teeth
This game was made for the 2023 Spooktober Visual Novel Jam
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Few games are so original and fun, both in art style and story, like this one. Amazing experience, loud laughs, and even wholesome at moments! Also, a remainder of the dangers of night shifts for everyone. 10/10
THANKS! Appreciate the review and kind words >:]
got all endings in a single sitting! pretty good, cant wait for the full version ^_^
SHWEET! >:D
Glad you enjoyed it, I shall deliver on that full version o7
The otaku / gamer references had me DYIN. Everything feels over the top and it's absolutely great. The style of everything put together was so cool and I really enjoyed even the little things like the text colour changing to match the colour of the background frame.
Also mad respect for body horror + gore. They did the job so well!
Yea I love adding in little details like the text colors and such, thanks for the nice words and the video :D
"It turns out relationships aren't like a GAME at all!"
Great art style. That hologram animations looked really cool. Loved the backgrounds and reading all the game titles. The parents going HAM was so funny. I love that the game leans heavily into the cringe of being socially awkward while never being creepy but in fact surprisingly wholesome.
I actually called myself Karl on my first play trough which cause some funny confusion. I spend a few minutes thinking I had been cloned by another projections thing. :)
Thank you for making this game.
Love the humor in this game. I highly enjoyed it! The art direction, character designs, and colors were amazing as well.
I loved this game, it was so much fun. The first time I played this style of game, and I enjoyed it so much. I highly recommend this game!
(Copied from my Spooktober rating page review to help this game within itch.io's algorithm!)
This was a fun time! I adore the visuals you used for this VN - they're super cute and expressive. I'm impressed you managed to create so many dynamic scenes in such a short period of time - and the glitch effects with the Virtual Evelyn are fantastic too.
The story made me smile a lot as well: I was pleasantly surprised with how sweet the good ending was, and the sillier endings made me laugh. Also, an anime and games fan, the references you made throughout made me chuckle (shoutout to Buzzerk and Within Our General Vicinity in particular).
Well done on the whole!
Clearly game of the year for 2026. Has a little something for everyone!
dang man I'm just ahead of my time
A cool little lightnovel story with a lot of good humour. I enjoyed it!
thanks broski